Friday, February 27, 2009

Raw

Details!
Spun in all the objects,
Describing life,
Connecting life.
Details!
So unimportant,
Adding just another,
“Thing” again;
Details!
So pretentious,
Luring, ah! alluring,
Incubating under brassy wraps;
Details!
They call finesse,
Adding silhouette,
To this vaporizing form;
Details!
Trying to catch,
Beauty in manual forms,
Mere tawdry!
Details!
I want no more,
Give me something,
Not elaborate;
Give me something,
Simple!
Uncivilized!
Bare!
Beautiful!
Give it!
Raw!

4 comments:

Winnie the poohi said...

Oh yes! Details do kill the whole thing!

Saurav Arya said...

Things are good as long as we dont get into details.

Subhajit said...

Though details are required at most of the times...

But life looks simple,beautiful and less complicated without the details.

Nice theme you have chosen.

Painting the Savanna... said...

thank u all